Well, my intent was for the plot of this to be as self-explanatory as possible, so I don’t have a lot to say about it, except that it’s awesome and I’m very proud of it.
It’s got a coherent plot now, even. Ignore everything that happened in episode Zero. Don’t ignore everything that was in episode Zero though.
Some people probably won’t like the fact that I used the same music again (it’s Bach’s Well Tempered Clavier Prelude 2, by the way). If somebody wants to compose some original music for me I’d gladly accept it, but until that happens I haven’t really got a better plan than this.